i'm listening to "blue lips" right now.
I give you a hamburger. racoons start crawling out of my fingernails, searching for the source of the delicious smell. I give you a hamburger. A while away, a kitten meows cutely, then is swallowed by a fan. All it wanted was a hamburger. I give you a hamburger. By your feet, a small pebble morphs into a hippo, eating everything in sight and spreading sparkles everywhere. I give you a hamburger. In a pitch black room, with no one to hear, two pieces of chocolate ponder their life choices and wonder if there was more to life then melting in a dark room. I give you a hamburger
Look at the girl who thinks I'm serious.
I just died
I can't xD
But glad you like it
In this case I just need to say that I totally agree with you. Yes, this critique IS really not normal.
shoosh, keep your voice down.
It thinks that it's like all the other critiques. You'll make it feel different :c
In all seriousness, I know how to write a critique.
Don't believe me?
Please check these two: [link] and [link]
I didn't write a serious critique this time because the person who posted this is my friend and also their little brother/sister's seven year old friend drew it.
Alas, it's just for laughs c:
Now, carry on your way, critique police. :3
I don't normally crit stuff okay
I'm a bit rusty